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Re: Army of God (Act Two) - deleted
I think it was great again. I also LOVE the the title. It shows the portion of the Bible which is Ephesians 6. As the person before said that you ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: God Comes After
I like to story. It was different from most stories about Jesus. Most portray him as beautiful and perfect in looks. I kind of like how you portray him as ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Army of God
Wow.... all I have to say is wow. You left me pretty much speechless. I know nothing of how to correctly review a script and I really don't want any ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Forsaken
Well, I liked it. It was good but as some people were saying it was missing some description. I LOVED though the message through out it!!!! I can totally relate ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Please click this
Ok I'll see what I can tell you. One thing is; do you capitalize Friars? If so then sometimes you didn't. I would also say work on your transitions, but ...
May 19, 2011