JaneAusten

This poem it not one of best ever written. I don't think the punctuation is at all right and it really has no patter like a poem so kind of ...

I love this poem. It reminds you to take a look around and notice God's wonderful creation and not to take it for granted. Thanks so much for the reminder!

Wow that is really good. It really shows what goes on in life. I think it would be cool to make a story out of this but this is really ...

ok again I am responding. I just think that you need to talk to Nate about this and see where the problem is. I think that if you go at ...

Again all I have to say is wow. You are really good at describing this. You are a really gifted writer with a passion for God witch is amazing!!!! I ...

I think it was great again. I also LOVE the the title. It shows the portion of the Bible which is Ephesians 6. As the person before said that you ...

I like to story. It was different from most stories about Jesus. Most portray him as beautiful and perfect in looks. I kind of like how you portray him as ...

Well my favorite singer is either Toby Mac or Lincoln Brewster, but my favorite band is SuperChick. And my favorite song, Forever Reign is by Kristian Stanfill.

Thanks, I appreciate you reading it. All of you.

Wow.... all I have to say is wow. You left me pretty much speechless. I know nothing of how to correctly review a script and I really don't want any ...

I changed the bible verses at the end of this poem I think theses fit better than Micah 6:8. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

I feel God’s love. I'm comforted by his hand when I cry. I see his mighty works. I saw him change lives of many people. I can feel the joy, ...

Well, I liked it. It was good but as some people were saying it was missing some description. I LOVED though the message through out it!!!! I can totally relate ...

Thanks so much for the input!!! I hope my paper will get an ok grade at the least!!! I had to hand it in today.

Ok I'll see what I can tell you. One thing is; do you capitalize Friars? If so then sometimes you didn't. I would also say work on your transitions, but ...