Janay82

Not bad. It seems like a bubby happy pop kind of song, like it’s not very serious but it’s the kind of thing that maybe you’d want to dance to. ...

I didn't think it was all that good, but not bad. i like the concept of the song but some of the lines didn't follow your ABAB rhyming pattern. for ...

I know you said to tear it apart, but I think this is really good! Especially for someone who's just 15! You did a good job describing the main character ...