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Re: Hopes and Dreams
I very much like the meaning of the poem and feel the same way. However, I don't think it flows that well. You definitely have pottential here and I can ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Writing is All I Know
The rhyming in this is very bouncy and flowing. All I can say is awesome job, this is a cute little poem ;)
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Delusive Savior
Thanks so much for the review! I think I will ask my forensics coach if they think I should do it. I just really wanted to know if anyone thought ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: If a day could last years.....
Wow I really liked this! They are definitely some interesting things to ponder. I do, however, think it is a bit long. It is repetative throughout the whole poem. Not ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Falls.
Seriously? Cause I swear i can see a person sitting in a chair in the bottom left corner and a couple heads near the bottom right...or maybe im just crazy ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Delusive Savior
I wrote this on Tuesday after being inspired by reading some Edgar Allen Poe. The reason I need this reviewed soon is because I am thinking about reading it for ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Falls.
I have a few pointers on this picture, mostly things you probably could not help, but things to look for in the future if perhaps a chance comes. First off, ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: April showers, bring May flowers....
Ok, first off, this was a very unique angle you took. I like how you can see the stems and a little sky in the background, as well as the ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: The Sun.
I really like this! I've always enjoyed nature scenes :) I like the blue sky, the sun, the tree, and the little cloud on the bottom. It's almost verging on ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Invincible
Wow thanks! I will try to post this on youtube soon and add a link here, but I have to wait until I'm home alone cause i have this fear ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Ballerina Love
I think this is quite well written. I have one thing that I didn't think made much sense though. When you said "I hold you so tight, on this cold ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Invincible
So anyway I don't think this is all that great but I JUST wrote it. Whenever I'm feeling strong emotions, I find ways to incorporate them into songs. Oh and ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Love is the movement
Ooh very artistic! I like the angle on the 1st one better by the way. It's a powerful statement and pretty neclace! I want it lol. I guess the only ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: Kitty in drawer
Aww what a cute kitty! I do have some problems with the picture though. First, the quality is quite poor, but my guess is that you couldn't do much about ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: My Dream
Thanks peeps! :P And kaiden, I was thinking the same thing. I actually did write this for someone, though I'm pretty sure they'll never read it lol
Nov 10, 2009
