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Janay82

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hopes and Dreams

    I very much like the meaning of the poem and feel the same way. However, I don't think it flows that well. You definitely have pottential here and I can ...

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Writing is All I Know

    The rhyming in this is very bouncy and flowing. All I can say is awesome job, this is a cute little poem ;)

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Delusive Savior

    Thanks so much for the review! I think I will ask my forensics coach if they think I should do it. I just really wanted to know if anyone thought ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: If a day could last years.....

    Wow I really liked this! They are definitely some interesting things to ponder. I do, however, think it is a bit long. It is repetative throughout the whole poem. Not ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Twilight Falls.

    Seriously? Cause I swear i can see a person sitting in a chair in the bottom left corner and a couple heads near the bottom right...or maybe im just crazy ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Delusive Savior

    I wrote this on Tuesday after being inspired by reading some Edgar Allen Poe. The reason I need this reviewed soon is because I am thinking about reading it for ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Twilight Falls.

    I have a few pointers on this picture, mostly things you probably could not help, but things to look for in the future if perhaps a chance comes. First off, ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: April showers, bring May flowers....

    Ok, first off, this was a very unique angle you took. I like how you can see the stems and a little sky in the background, as well as the ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: The Sun.

    I really like this! I've always enjoyed nature scenes :) I like the blue sky, the sun, the tree, and the little cloud on the bottom. It's almost verging on ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Invincible

    Wow thanks! I will try to post this on youtube soon and add a link here, but I have to wait until I'm home alone cause i have this fear ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Ballerina Love

    I think this is quite well written. I have one thing that I didn't think made much sense though. When you said "I hold you so tight, on this cold ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Invincible

    So anyway I don't think this is all that great but I JUST wrote it. Whenever I'm feeling strong emotions, I find ways to incorporate them into songs. Oh and ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Love is the movement

    Ooh very artistic! I like the angle on the 1st one better by the way. It's a powerful statement and pretty neclace! I want it lol. I guess the only ...

    Nov 24, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Kitty in drawer

    Aww what a cute kitty! I do have some problems with the picture though. First, the quality is quite poor, but my guess is that you couldn't do much about ...

    Nov 24, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Dream

    Thanks peeps! :P And kaiden, I was thinking the same thing. I actually did write this for someone, though I'm pretty sure they'll never read it lol

    Nov 10, 2009


i exist in a constant state of confusion so its ok
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