Janay82

Thanks for the advice! I will see about working on it :)

This poem is kinda different so I really wanna know what you think! *I made some ajustments according to your suggestions ;) - False hope pours down on you like ...

I like this! I agree with most the others on this photo. The ponytail is quite distracting. Next time try to remember to keep things like that out of pictures. ...

Thanks everyone! I will consider your advice, though I do rather like it like this. Merry Christmas! :D

Thanks for the reply! I get what you mean. I thought that too, but I already put "remain" in the same phrase so it sounded weird. Then I found a ...

I think this work is exceptionally good! Very deep, good meaning. I don't really have a critique for you, but I do have a star! ;)

I just wrote this poem, so it might need some work. I may be reading this for forensics if y'all(lol) like it. Suggestions are very much welcome! :) --- Growing ...

Thanks June! I do try to post my songs on youtube and put a link here so people can hear the song, so hopefully I can do that soon ;)

Thanks Carly! I think I will edit a few of the parts you mentioned, but I bet if you heard the song, some of it would make more sense. And ...

I literally JUST wrote this song, so can't really tell you the chords, but it is a slow song with just guitar(maybe piano too) and snare and bass drum starting ...

I very much like the idea of it, but you are right, there isn't really a rhyme scheme here, so it doesn't flow. However, I bet this would make a ...

I read this and the last chapter and loved them both! It's a unique story and I genuinely want to keep reading! I have no critique for you, but I ...

I actually liked this piece quite a bit. You did have a lot of capitalization and grammatical errors that you can hopefully fix though. And also, to me it didn't ...

Thank you and you're welcome! :)

That does sound similar to an Owl City song. And it's very good. I would love to see the rest of this song and hear it as well!