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Okay, I'll fix the typos. And I'll keep that in mind, but I don't think I'll change it just yet unless anyone else mentions it. Thanks though.

Okay thanks. I'll fix the typos right away. Thanks for the pointers.

Okay, so here's the second chapter, also heavily edited. Tell me what you think. I know it's really short, but I did my best. _____________ The missing note bothered Brad ...

Okay, I've done yet another rewrite of the preface and first chapter of the Love Note, due in large to people saying I jumped into the action too fast. So, ...

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Comments in red. *It's been ages since I've worked on my novel, but here's another go...CRITICIZE AWAY PLEASE=). This is completely unedited. The novel was previously known as Lone Teen--just ...

Anyone else? Please people I need feedback!

Okay, I'll do that. Thanks. :)

Okay yes that helps a lot. Thanks. You're a lot of help. And I guess I've been reading too much Fear Street lately; in those books the poor kids that ...

Okay thanks everyone. I know it must have taken a while to get through this, and I appreciate it. I don't know if I'll be able to rewrite before the ...

I just posted this and could really use some constructive feedback. Harshness is appreciated. :P Name: The Love Note Genre: Supernatural Word Count: 4622 Link: This is the first chapter. ...

Okay, like I said though, no pressure and definitely no rush.

Um, yeah, what Melkor said! :D Name: The Love Note Genre: Supernatural Word Count: 4622 Link: It's really long, so I'll understand if you don't want to review it, but ...

Okay, I just posted this and could use some feedback. No toning down necesarry. :) It's supernatural, you don't have anything about that in your lists,k so I though I'd ...

Okay, so this is the heavily edited version of the first chapter of my novel-in-progress THe Love Note. I'll warn you it's very long, but apprently we are no longer ...