Jamie_rocks

Mark tried to scream, but as soon as he opened his mouth the icy cold water flooded in, and all that emerged was a strangled gurgling sound. He kicked and ...

I think you're good at writing, but this is kind of shady. It's short, so there isn't much to comment on. However, since this is the beginning you should spend ...

Awwww man, I came too late for the cookies. :( That was really good though. The actual Cinderella is really boring now, but this new twist is hilarious, you've just ...

Hey ya'll, I', Jamie. Uh, I came here looking for constructive criticism on my novels, and to review other stories. Hoping to meet some other teen authors, too.