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Re: Character Chat
I don't know, maybe this already exists, but basically, you talk in first person with your main character, tell a bit about yourself and chat other people main characters, ask ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Rate The Idea Above You!
9/10 sounds very interesting, makes me want to read the story. Mine is kind of strange, it's my first crack at writing a love story. (I'm not exactly the romantic ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: What influenced you to write what you are writing right now?
Hmmm, let's see, I get inspiration from a lot of different places. The Revenge, The Witness, Endangered Species, and The Ransom all came from a dream I had that I ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: If Only (Updated!)
I like where it's going. There was a few errors but I think the others caught them already. A couple things though, I don't know many teens that use that ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: At what age did you start writing and
I did my first real story in first grade, I still have it. It's called Me, my Best Friend, the Stray Dog, and the Two-Headed Cobra. It was 16 half-pages ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Childlike
Well done, I really liked it. there was a few phrases with awkward wording, but the others caught all of them. I'd like to see where this story goes. There ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: I Dare You
There's some mild language, it will probably get way worse later on. I Dare You “Aaarrrggghhhh! Get out of my room!” Donya Allen screamed at her younger brother, Gregory. She ...
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: Promises Not Kept (Part Three of Three)
I like it, and I know you had a page limit, but I think you should re-do it now that the assignment is over, make it a bit longer. Also, ...
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: Promises Not Kept (Part Two of Three)
I liked this piece, with a little work it could be really good. I'm not gonna repeat all the typos since everyone else already did. I agree though, when I ...
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: The Revenge Part 1
no one else wants to review me? :(
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
7/10 Nice, but kind of random.
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: The Revenge Part 1
OK thanks, I'll keep that in mind when I rewrite it.
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: What is your favorite food?
Wow, finally I topic for me. I LOVE food. Most people wouldn't guess it by looking at me though.The creators of Dove, Hershey's, and Godiva are one step below God. ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Public Speaking
I personally think you can't go wrong with food. I had to do a report to convine people to eat chocolate. It's the easiest topic I've ever had.
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Has Anyone Here read The Warriors Series?
OMG! I love Warriors. Dark River is amazing! I can't believe how it turned out, but I won't say anything for fear of spoilers. And the manga books are cool ...
Apr 27, 2008