Jamie_rocks

Could you please review this for me? It's the third chapter of a supernatural novel I'm working on. You don't need to review the first two, though if you want ...

Could you please review this for me? It's the third chapter of a supernatural novel I'm working on. You don't need to review the first two, though if you want ...

Brad groaned and opened his eyes. Almost immediately he was alarmed; all he could see was a glaring bright white light. He wasn’t aware that his breathing sped up, but ...

Yes. Like I said, I'll clarify that later, but this is just a secondary project and I really don't have the time right now. I'm just collecting input so that ...

Anyone? Please I need feedback!

Okay, thanks you guys so much for all your effort. I know I'm really horrible with typos and run-on sentences; my critiquers get on my back about it all the ...

Okay, thanks for taking the time to review this. I knew it would be flawed, as I just wrote it last night, so thanks for pointing everything out. Though as ...

PG-13 for references to rape. I know it's short, given that it's only the preface. Please just tell me what you think of this, I'm sure it has typos, and ...

Okay, let's try posting the link again:

Okay thanks. And I guess I should clarify on one point in the piece - the monster is her mother. I'll try and make that clearer as soon as I ...

Okay thanks. And I guess I should clarify on one point in the piece - the monster is her mother. I'll try and make that clearer as soon as I ...

Hey! If you get around to it, I could really use a review on the preface I just posted for a novel I'm working on. It's supernatural, you didn't mention ...

Hello! When you get around to it, I cold use a review on the preface I just posted for a novel I'm working on. It's short, so it shouldn't take ...

Okay, so this is the edited version of preface I submitted about a year ago and haven't touched since then. I wrote it today while I was waiting to be ...

No one else has anything to say? Please?