Jamie_rocks

Okay, thanks for everything. Once the first chapter is done, I'll edit this and post them together.

“Hey Tara, I bet can eat more subs than you.” Zephyr grinned hugely. I smiled and shook my head slowly; everything was a competition for Zephyr. “Can’t you wait till ...

Okay, thanks a bunch. I didn't even notice that. I'll do that when I rewrite.

Hey! That's cool, I'm Jamie too! I'm a year younger though. Good luck with getting your writing started up again. I'll go look at it. See you around!

I like it. The characters are very real. You have the process of grief down completely. His t-cell count was almost non-existent an' the antibiotics weren't doing any good This ...

OK, I've never seen Prom Night so I wouldn't know. Thanks, I'll have to look into that. I should have chapter two out in less than a week.

Ha ha! Very funny. Keep up the humor it will help. Remmy was very tall, over six feet, and he was still quite muscled even though he had a lean ...

Oh, okay. Thanks!

Hi, I'm back. I like your characters, they seem real. Very good emotions, especially Genny's pride and resolution not to ask for ask. I agree about showing not telling, as ...

Okay, I know I just reviewed, but I have a comment on a previous review. "Bored" is used perfectly, that is a definition of the word, you don't have to ...

When I read my reviews, some people take quotes from the story and put them in their review. How do you do that when you're reviewing?

OK, I'm working on it now. Thanks!

For a moment Brad opened his eyes. An unfamiliar face was looking down at him, wearing glasses and with dirty, tangled brown hair. Brad didn’t think she knew he was ...

OK, it looks like the nitpicking is all covered, so I won't repeat it. Question: Is the MC a guy or girl? Scasha says girl, but it never actually says, ...

OK, I agree. I like the MC's attitude, it makes him(or her) easier to relate to, given that I'm a teen. I also think it's kind of amusing that in ...