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Re: Chapter Three : The Witches, The Gifts, And The Staffs
Chapter Three The Witches, The Gifts, And The Staffs The Canaby sisters stood looking at the witches, and the witches looking at them. “Who are you?” asked one of the ...
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Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
um, 4/10. Sorry, but I don't really understand what's going on in your siggie.
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Free Reviews =D
Hey, I'm back. Mainly thanks to your review, I've rewritten the first chapter. Could you please check it out?
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Need Mucho Reviews
Hey, I just posted this, it's the first chapter of a supernatural horror story. It's sort of long, but not too bad. I'm worried about my dialog, description, and character ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Red Line Reviews
Ooh, I'm the first one! I just posted this, and I'm looking for a harsh critique. (It's supernaural though, I hope you don't mind). Especially I want to know if ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Critiques, Anyone?
Okay, I just posted this and I need reviews. It's the first chapter of a supernatural horror. Sorry, it's kind of long. P.S. Are you asking for anything in return?
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]
Name: The Love Note Genre: Supernatural horror Summary: After finding and reading an old love note in his locker, high school Freshman Brad Liftridge finds himself being stalked by the ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Get 'Em While They're Hot!
Okay, it's done. It's called the Love Note and it's a supernatural horror. Sorry, it's kind of long.
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: The Love Note (Chapter one, edited)
A cry of pain rose out above the crack of a gunshot. Like a scene from a movie, a teenage boy clutched his bloodied chest and fell over backwards. As ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Get 'Em While They're Hot!
I'm massively editing the first chapter in my novel right now. As soon as I"m done I'll post the link.
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: Blinkingly-good Crits
I'm also almost done with a massive edit. I'll post the link when it's up.
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
Hmmm, I'm thinking something about the lottery. It makes me think that some person wins the lottery, and then after he collects his money a lot of bad things keep ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: Shafter Story-Shredding Services
1) - - - It's fantasy (Mermaids) 2)Return to Milantis (Working Title) 3)Ariana is the heir to the throne of Milantis, but when she was a baby the kingdom was ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: Questions Only
Why should we give the attention to fathers?
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me
Who's to say that romance has to be between two humans? Pork wanted me to write this. Here you go. It's really late right now, and I can't find any ...
Jul 18, 2008
