Jamie_rocks

Uh, sounds a little depressing, so I'm going to guess it's sad. Brings to mind a young MC that has had something bad happen to them. I might read it, ...

I'm back. The review on my first piece was awesome. Can you help be out again? Rip it to shreds please.

Hi, I'm back. Thanks for the review, but could you please help with the second chapter? It really needs to be ripped to shreds. Thanks in advance!

Thanks for the reviews. I'll be working on chapter two a lot more so those chnages probably won't be made for a while.

Okay, here's the first chapter to a supernatural story I'm working on. I warn you, it's a little long. Are you asking for anything in return?

Thanks. And about the paper, I would tell you what it said, but I'm romantically challenged and don't have a clue what to write in a love note.

This is the recently edited first chapter to a fiction story I'm working on. It's a little long, I know, but I need reviews. The main thing I'm worried about ...

Um, is groveling required in order to get a review? This is the first chapter of a fiction story I'm working on. It's a little long, but I'll give you ...

Still waiting on a review. *snore*

Okay, thanks. Not harsh at all, just helpful. A question though: Why exactly do people tend to think that this comes off as Disney style? You've said that, multiple times. ...

I donated at least five days ago. It would be nice to receive a review soon, seeing how many people seem to be involved in this CCF thing.

Okay, I've got one. It's not fantasy, but it's fiction. Sorry, it's a little long, and no problem if it takes you a while to get around to it. Oh, ...

Okay, I've changed my mind. I edited it. Please tell me what you think now.

Chapter Three The Witches, The Gifts, And The Staffs The Canaby sisters stood looking at the witches, and the witches looking at them. “Who are you?” asked one of the ...

This is the first chapter to supernatural novel. I warn you, it's long. Thanks in advance!