Jamie_rocks

This is a story that is about a group of shape shifters. Everyone says this story is good but i know better so i'm asking the YWS for advice.Please critique ...

I'm writing like, 15 novels. My one main one is up in the Other Fiction forum. I have the first two chapters done and I'm working on the third. I ...

Okay, I have to agree with Icaruss, because I swear today I was about two seconds away from clawing out the eyes of the guy that sits behind me. Lolz. ...

The point is just to write as many funny ways to make trick-or-treaters hate you. All I ask is that you keep it PG-13, and number the ways. I'll start. ...

Okay, I'm a girl trying to write a novel from a guy's POV. I can't seem to get into his head though. Any tips? Stuff I should try to remember ...

Hmmm, fantasy comes to mind, since I've never heard of a veen. I would read the blurb to see what it was about. If it interested me I'd read it. ...

Have a question about what format or person to write in? Need info to make your story more believable? Can't beat writer's block? Want to fond a writing partner? Post ...

No, not too harsh at all. It was a lot of help. :) Thanks for everything, though I can't rewrite just yet what with school back up and working on ...

Okay, thanks. Again with the typos. :( I think I got all of them this though. I'm working on chapter three, but it won't be postable for another few weeks ...

Okay thanks. I'm not so sure I'm going to correct the grammar problems in the dialog because I don't know very many teens that use proper grammar, but the rest ...

Hi, this is a supernatural fiction story. It's really only the second chapter that needs reviews, but you'll have to at least read the first to know what's going on. ...

Hi, I need help with a supernatural story I'm working on. It's really only the second one that needs reviews, but you'll have to read the first one to know ...

Brad groaned and blinked open his eyes. Every part of his body ached, and the bright fluorescent lights glared down harshly. His head was fuzzy, and he couldn't figure out ...

Hello. This is a supernatural story. I have two chapters posted. However, it's more the second chapter I need reviews on rather than the first, so if you could just ...

I use blonde for both. Though Microsoft Word doesn't seem to agree with me...