Jamie_rocks

Okay, I know this question has been asked before, but there was two different answers, and I'm not sure which one is right. If my chapters are each around 3.5k ...

I never got my critique, and I asked over three months ago. This place is a rip-off.

Hahaha! Lolz. I'm trick-or-treating this year, but once I get "too old" I'll have to try some of these.

Okay, my school's fall break is officially over, :(, but I'm still reviewing. Of course during the week I'm uber busy, but I promise I'll get to any requests as ...

Okay, I really liked this story. I like to consider myself a fairly harsh critiquer, and I checked as best I could, but couldn't find anything majorly wrong, other than ...

Okay, I'm a first time advanced critiquer, so let's see if I can figure out how this works. Okay, I like your writing style and it seems to me like ...

Come on people. I need reviews! Please?

Okay thanks for the review. And the three years before part would probably make more sense if you read the in-progress-novel it goes with. I get that whole name thing ...

The result of a bad fever. I should get sick more often. Anyways, any comments would help. Thanks. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Give me one good reason why

Yeah, I would do that, but I'm not staying home and passing out on free candy. :D

Okay, so this is an excerpt from a novel I'm working on, the majority of it is a flashback. It's been pulled out from around the middle, but I don't ...

I'm gonna go with 4/10 because my math teacher last year beat that into our heads and now I really don't like variables.

haha. funny comics. 16. Okay, wear dark sunglasses and label a briefcase "Top Secret." Open the door a crack, whisper, "It's about time you got here," give them the briefcase ...

Top Secret Cobra: Half-Human -Extract 2- (Please comment on this-I need to know what people think of it! Thanks) Cobra was running. His shoes rang on the metal floor as ...

Really hope we don't run into a shark. What would you do if you discovered one of your parents had been hired as a hitman (or woman)?