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Hm, I don't know. I'm not big on slang myself, so I basically just copied the people at my school. That of course, could be a problem, though, because Brad ...

Okay thanks. That was a lot of help. I'll keep these in mind, but it may be a while before I get to work on this one again. :)

Okay, you're both done. Who's next?

I need this reviewed because it is a contest entry at my school and I don ' t trust my teacher :D Comments in red Anne lifted the last box ...

Nope. You're bad at this Cobra. TPBM is in the middle of writing a novel.

Banned for giving ChrisCaraway a higher rating than me.

Comments in red I bit down on my lip and turned over in bed with my mobile pressed firmly to my left ear. Yet again I was smiling ear to ...

Thanks Ali, for your true nit-picking talents. I'll keep the comments in mind. This novel is on a halt though, until I finish The Love Note. I've just been wanting ...

No, I'm pretty sure I'm not SilverSunlight. ~ The person below me loves country music.

Banned for living inside your own head.

8/10. It seems original enough. Minus points because you don't know where it's going. This is what would be the synopsis on the back of the book if it was ...

Why would you guys jump to conclusions about whether or not that's a statement?

Banned for not knowing how to spell banned.

Are you open to doing advanced critiques?

Okay, I just posted this a few days ago and it has no reviews, so please. It's the first two chapters of my supernatural novel-to-be The Love Note. It's long ...