Jalmoc

Another Story I wrote in history lol. Enjoy! The Meaningless War Screams of agony echoed across the battlefield, as soldiers were cut down by clouds of arrows. Dust kicked up ...

Hey guys, I really appreciate the reviews!! The reason that the capitalization is off is because I wrote this from my iPad lol.

This is the first poem I've ever written... So I don't know if it's good or not. Lol. Well, Enjoy. Leaving Fear grows within my heart, Knowing the you’ll be ...

*hides in fear* Thats really good, and really scary! Lol Congrats on drawing that! Lol --Jalmoc

Should be in poetry as everyone else stated lol. This was very good otherwise! :) Keep Writing!! --Jalmoc

I'm not very good at reviewing poems, but if it's any help, I really really liked it!! Lol. :D Well Keep Writing!! :) Sincerely, --Jalmoc

Hello YWS, another story for you to enjoy!! :D Sacrifice I looked to her as the sun beat down on our heads. I can’t believe that summer is already here. ...

Very nice way to reintroduce yourself to YWS. :D lol

This is rather depressing... :( I loved it though!!! Keep writing!! --Jalmoc

D: this was really sad!!! D ...: But I definitely loved the story. I would love to read more stories that are like this one. Well Keep Writing!!! --Jalmoc

I really thought this was interesting. I love how you described the feeling of blood (not trying to be weird or anything. lol). It makes me wonder if animals really ...

Wow! Just wow! This story took some real skill to put together. I love the idea of the time difference between the worlds. So a question, where did his shadow ...

I got bored during English class. Lol. We were watching Romeo and Juliet, so I decided to write a short romance. :P Enjoy!! Upon Your Love Laughter echoed through the ...

I felt like this was really rushed. Why do all of these girls agree to marry him? Just because he gave them gifts? There must be more behind it. Also, ...

The Enchanted Ones The sun beamed on my skin; the heat leaving it with a stinging sensation. Chatter from people both near and far rung in my ears, along with ...