Jalmoc

Under The Stars Alone under the stars, Just you and me. My heart beats against yours, Trying to let it pour it's feelings. I run my hand through your hair, ...

Well, I was talking with my girlfriend, and she saw a bunny out the window and said how adorable they are, and I said they're evil because they help crazy ...

Well, I was talking with my girlfriend, and she saw a bunny out the window and said how adorable they are, and I said they're evil because they help crazy ...

Just an idea I had in class. Lol. Enjoy! Bunnies are evil Screams surrounded me as the army of bunnies charged toward us. Their razor sharp teeth flashed as they ...

This was a really good piece, at least I thought so. ;) Well, I'm horrible at reviewing, so I'm just going to comment. :D In the beginning, I love how ...

What does it matter how the book looks on the out side, or the texture, or the hardness/softness of it? A book is a book and you should care about ...

I love the emotion that you put into this. :) I feel like I can really connect with the character. Feeling that way isn't the greatest feeling in the world, ...

When I read this, I felt like I was reading a horror/mystery. Very nice! :D Well, it seems everyone else got most of the problems, so I'm just going to ...

I really loved this!! I know exactly how that feels, and it really rough to get through. I can't really see anything wrong with this piece, so I don't think ...

I loved this!! :D lol. Great idea!!

True Love True love at first sight,  How I dream about it every night. To be held by you, Is a dream come true. Looking into your eyes, Time really ...

Hi there!! I thought this piece was very interesting! I'd love to read more if you add on to it! Keep Writing! --Jalmoc

This is very true... But sometimes, the brakes don't always work. ;)

I really liked this story! One of the greatest fears of Humans is the fear of drowning. I thought that you really captured the emotion of that fear. Other than ...

I'm not trying to bash on this story or anything, but this sounds exactly like a story I read out of my English book. It was titled The Sniper, by ...