Jalmoc

Hello YWS, another story I wrote in a time of emotional turmoil. I hope you guys enjoy the read! (If you like the story, please press like at the top! ...

This is a short idea for one of my RP characters, please give me feedback of what I could improve. But I hope you enjoy! :D (If you like this, ...

This was short, but it still got it's point across. :) I love your comparison to a Phoenix, it fits it perfectly. (at least in my opinion. :) ) There's ...

Wow. That was really powerful... I loved this story and how well written it was from one scene to the next. I thought this was going to be another one ...

Wow... I really hope this isn't from personal experience. But anyways, I thought it was pretty well written overall. You kept my attention through the whole thing. :) (not an ...

I enjoyed this story. One of my questions were, who were they at war with? If you said who they were at war with, then it wasn't very defined in ...

A story I wrote while being bored in Science class lol. Enjoy! Falling Stars We walked through the trails in the park, enjoying all around us. I squeezed your hand ...

Ummmm.... There's a slight problem. Lol. There's no cover for us to look at! D: UNLESS!! That was your plan! :O If this is true then well done! :D It ...

Wow! Those look amazing!! :D I'm a sucker for the color green and you have quite a bit in there! I also love the preview of the story! It captures ...

So I wrote this when I was a little down, so it might be a little rough. Please "like" my story at the top if you like it. :) But ...

Pie! :D

A story I wrote when my heart was shattered and nothing seemed alright. Across The Ocean Soft music played around them as the couple hugged and slowly danced to the ...

I really enjoyed this poem. :) It's true that only people who have experienced that truly know the pain of being alone. You really brought that to light in your ...

I absolutely love this. :D I have seen this happen in a lot of my friends' lives. It sucks for the person at the door, but the other person gets ...

I really love the emphasis on the characters' faces. These were really well drawn, and thought out. (much much better than I could ever possibly do) I just have one ...