Jalmoc

Hi there Paramore! :D I was wondering if you would review my first chapter of a Star Wars FanFic I've been working on. There's not much to it, but I'd ...

Hi there ItalianIlluminist. :) My name's Jalmoc, or Jal for short. I've been on this site forever, but I stopped for awhile and now I don't know who is who. ...

Very well done!! I love the turmoil that you put him through! I feel the same way Judy, what happened to the Rebel Alliance? Did they just disappear? If they ...

That was really good! :D I'm a hardcore Star Wars fan, so this was rather refreshing! I think that Luke should have killed Vader though. But that's just my opinion! ...

Hi Demeter. :D You think you could look this over for me? :) It's a romance, and I'm attempting to write a novel. I want to know how I did ...

Okay, so this is my first attempt ever at trying to write a novel so bear with me!! :D A Love Unheard Of Chapter 1: Unusual Friends Micah woke up ...

Wow! For being so short, that packed a lot of emotion and story into it!! I loved it! I don't exactly know how to review lyrics. Lol. So I'm just ...

Hi there! I'm Jalmoc, and your story caught my eye! Honestly, I thought it was pretty good for being a first time fiction story! You left the ending where anything ...

I enjoyed this story, but I felt like it was really rushed. You didn't really describe what the main character looked like. From what you've told us I envision a ...

Hi YWS, I've got a little scene from a story I might publish later on. I hope you enjoy it, and feel free to throw out some ideas! Padawan Battle ...

Here's a story that I wrote when I was in history. Enjoy! :D Rain streamed down my face as I ran through the night, trying to find her. My eyes ...

Man... You must have some serious thoughts brewing in that head of yours. Lol. I once again don't see anything wrong which is really good! (But I'm not the best ...

Man... You must have some serious thoughts brewing in that head of yours. Lol. I once again don't see anything wrong which is really good! (But I'm not the best ...

Hi again. Lol. Another one huh? This one isn't about questions but about how you can't do things... I think a good title would be Uncontrollable :) But once again ...

Hi there! :) I'm glad I'm the first one to read this! :D I think that a lot of people think these same exact questions in their head about everyday, ...