Jalmoc

Hi, do you think you could look this over? I just finished it. Thanks! :D

I love how you made Death seem like he wasn't just a cold hearted life taker. You showed that he really feels peoples pain as they die. Let me know ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this story. Let me know when you're gonna write more to this or another. Great imagery also. :D

The Definition of Love I felt like I had just been shot. The world shattered around me as I read her lips in slow motion as she talked to me…. ...