Jalmoc

Hey there! I thought that you did spectacular with this piece. I loved how you changed the definition of Angel! Who would've thought that they could be somehting else completely? ...

Okay, so i was really bored in class, so i just started writing. I thought to put it on here to see what people think. He struck another blow, only ...

Hello! I was going through stories, and this title caught my eye, so I thought I would review it. Well first off, I loved the introduction, but i wish you ...

My Freshmen Picture. XD

This was a great story! I love how you describe everything! If this was just a random story that your wrote in class, imagine what you can do when you ...

I thought you were gonna be a Nessie Em..

This was very well thought through for a quick inspiration story. :) I love how you gave the eraser feelings and desires, it makes the readers feel attached to the ...

HAHAHA. I loved it! I love the original song, but you just made it hysterical! I wonder what inspired you to redo the song in a pirate theme? I bet ...

Wow! This was a really great story. I'm not really any good at reviews, but it looks like everyone else got everythything that was wrong here. I just hope that ...

It seems that everyone else already got the main problems. I'm not that good with reviewing anyway, but this seems like a really good story. I hope that you can ...

me, im all the way to the right

me

This is me

WOW! Just saying. ;)

Plz check my story out. :)