Jalmoc

I have a reservation. :)

Here you go! Please review! its a halo fanfiction!

Hello YWS people! I just got finished playing the epic game; Halo Reach. I was looking through our fan-fiction, and noticed we didn't have a lot of Halo stories so, ...

Hi! I was wondering if you could review my short romance story? :) Here it is if you have time. :) The main things I want reviewed, are grammar, and ...

Hey, I was looking through the romance stories and this one caught my attention. I'm not so good at reviewing, but stay with me alright? Lol. I chewed on my ...

Thanks Kyle, i appreciate that. haha. my class periods are actually an hour and ten minutes

Hi there! :) I thought that this was an excellent story! You over all let the emotions of the main character flow, so the readers could understand what she was ...

I got another if you want to review it. haha. :D

Hey YWS people! I wrote another short story during my History class, its a little rough, but I'd appreciate any reviews! Thanks! "Hold still and be quiet!" the soldier next ...

Sorry, but I keep reading over this story. I absolutely love it! I really really hope that you write more! I just love the whole Death Song feature! It kinda ...

The ending is really hard to follow, what caused this nightmare? Was she actually pregnant? You might want to try and adjust the ending of this so that people can ...

Hey, I'm rushed on time, but I really loved this story. You really know how to build suspense. Keep writing!

I've got another, if your up for it. :)

Hey there, everyone pretty much covered what was wrong. haha. Im not that great at reviwing anyway, but this was a great story! I look forward to reading more if ...

I love how you combined school and the bible in this story!!! I'm not really any good at nitpicking either, so I'll let other people dot that! Keep writing1!!!