Jalmoc

Another Halo fan fiction for all you Halo fans!! I watched as the last UNSC ship left Reach... The planet had been destroyed by the Covenant, and I was the ...

Hello! I am a very huge fan of Dragon Age: Origins and all the others. I love how you captured the battle graphics in this story!! I think you should ...

Hey Lavi. :D I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reviewing this? People haven't really commented on it, and I'm kinda stumped on where to take it. If you could ...

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Hello YWS, another short story. I watched as another man fell beneath my blood lust. His mangled body falling to the ground to join the rest of the carnage around ...

Hi there! :D please review! It's fantasy/action. :D

Hello YWS, this a story wrote by my friend. He doesn't have a computer so I posted it for him. :) Critique away! I hear the rush of the wind, ...

Ok,... I hope that this isn't from experience. But, i feel like the last part of this should go in a blog, not a story. You captured the imagery pretty ...

I know that many people have commented on this, but i absolutely LOVED this!!! I couldn't stop laughing through the entire thing!!! Thank you for writing this! :D

I immediately got lost from the beginning. It seems like you just stuck sentences together, trying to make sense of it. One thing i got really confused on was the ...

Hello again YWS!! I wrote this story in history, and its really rough so bear with me. :) Swords clashed in the distance... I charged forward towards a knight who ...

Hi there! I'm Jalmoc. :D So i randomly read stories like a good writer and comment. Lol. so to your story. I felt like it was kind of rushed.... How ...

You've put my heart in turmoil... I love the Zelda series, I never would have expected this. Its very well written though, excuse me while i wipe the tears from ...

Here are some photos i just took. Lol.

Here are some weapons of mine....