Jaime0102

This is my first post and first try at poetry. __________________________________________________________________________________________ When things seem to be straight They are crooked When things s

This was really good. Awsome even. I like the description of the characters and the concept of magical creatures. Just a few things: Except for one thing. A pair of ...

Great. That's the only word for it. The hook was great, the part about Julian giving up was great, the ball of pure light was great, the whole store was ...

I am not going to critique. All I'm going to say is this was a great story and I understood far more than I expected to. And suprisingly, I wasn't ...

If you really want to get into the real Greek myths and such, a fairly good book to start with (well, this is what I read when I was in ...

awsome

I don't get why people don't get it. It's not hard to comprehend but maybe thats just me. I think this story is awsome and I'm about to read the ...

I thought it was really good. Just a few things. (Please mind my spelling) Zahara glanced through the limbs of the redwood trees from her perch on a neighboring tree ...

This is great!!! Didn't see that twist in the end. I didn't really see anything wrong with it. Please PM me when you post more.

I thought the prolouge was good, just one thing She had to get back to her cubs, which she'd given birth to a coupel of weeks after she'd been exciled ...

I think your story is good so far. But one thing: Artemis is a Greek Goddess. If you don't care that's fine but if you do you can use her ...