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Jaguar52

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Universe (at war)

    I was really interested with the title of this piece, it drew me in! Although the first paragraph confused me and made me wonder if I should keep reading, I ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Why? (rated for swear words)

    I thought it was a very nice poem, it expressed the pain you are going through. Something to think about: I think the last three lines didn't really fit into ...

    Feb 7, 2010


Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong.
— Neil Gaiman