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Jaguar52

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Universe (at war)

    I was really interested with the title of this piece, it drew me in! Although the first paragraph confused me and made me wonder if I should keep reading, I ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Why? (rated for swear words)

    I thought it was a very nice poem, it expressed the pain you are going through. Something to think about: I think the last three lines didn't really fit into ...

    Feb 7, 2010


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