JackpotJohnson

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Just a rough draft...anyone got comments or concerns?

Yup...The Patriotic Spirit is in that picture

Sneak Peek of: The Yangziat System Mission By: JackpotJohnson :D Thanks that would be great

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!These are stunning great!

Hey these are good...but empty....I really don't know how to explain but they are good

Wow these are great..... :D keep up the good work

I like it.....its good

Its interesting...Just resize it :D

I like it. :D I look forward to seeing more works of yours in the future

The Serpent Tooth Around 1500 years ago, a great hero was born. Nastrotium a Norse god was born to the son of Thor. Little did Nastrotium know that he was ...

Good...I liked it..i would provide constructive criticism but what i needed to say was already said. :D Good Job!!

Its good...Real good, however i have to agree with the others...other than that it was good

Thank you both for your critique's and ideas. I will use your ideas and apply them to future stories. Again thank you both.

Prologue: In the days before humans roamed the earth, there where four legendary Princes. Those four Princes held four legendary powers. When these Princes died off, they had their powers ...