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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fire and Ice

    Your poem certianly is unique but maybe you should start somewhere a little farther back, like the person/narrator is lying down in bed late at night and they close thier ...

    May 17, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Wind Brother

    A very good peice but it took me about half way through the story to figure out just what the narrator might be. I'm thinking a wood nymph, elf, or ...

    May 16, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter One of 'Cracks in the Sidewalk'

    Liz Landry seems more like a mannequin than a mother. If you were her and an officer came to your house showing you a picture of your dead son, would ...

    Apr 3, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Ummmm, hi peeps. My name is Jackie Perez {big surprise there lol} and I like to watch anime, read, and write. I live in Texas, America, and true to where ...

    Apr 3, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Ummmm, hi peeps. My name is Jackie Perez {big surprise there lol} and I like to watch anime, read, and write. I live in Texas, America, and true to where ...

    Apr 3, 2009


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