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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Cataclysm

    Thanks Amelia! :) I know, i know - as I was writing it i'm just like "keep cramming ambiguous things in there" and really it ties with what I was ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Cataclysm

    Read this. Hey readers and reviewers! This is my entry in the 250 word story contest "Beginning of the End". Basically the first word in the story had to be ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The End Is A New Beginning

    Okay I really liked this. No, I am not religious - in fact I see religion as the solution to the fear of death a mass of fool's desperately cling ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Virus irruption (extended)

    Okay. First, "Eruption". Above reviewer's right, unless you intentionally misspelled the word for the sake of title appeal or something. Second, good job with this beginning. There were quite a ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Failed contest entry

    They're the ones who told me to post here, in this exact manner, so yeah.

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Failed contest entry

    Contest entry: Contest page: Topic id: 85824 Sorry, first time entering a competition and misunderstood the submission process. I posted my entry in a forum rather than on the contest ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [7]

    Banned for only raising one eyebrow.

    Aug 19, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Chasing Rainbows ~

    Okay, I love good metaphors and I quite like this. I'm not going to put a lot of energy into nitpicking grammatical errors or identifying confusing imagery, because I'm tired ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Discontented

    Hi Ashjoy. I'm going to first make the point that poetry and I have a bad history (see index, p.35), at least when it comes to appreciating structure and stanza ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: (150 WORDS) Contest Submission

    Thank you all for the reviews. Chosenofair, sorry I don't know if you got confused or something but i don't have a signature, and "Parsons" was the ID of the ...

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: (150 WORDS) Contest Submission

    PARSONS There “Parsons” stood, caked in dust and engulfed by plumes of industrial smoke, which crawled upwards from amongst the thousands of workers on the metal grating below. My gaze ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Greetings. I am also a "newb". Please don't hesitate to give me a review or ask for me to review your work. Love to get the "creative juices flowing". Cool ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Angel Chapter 1

    Before I type anything, I'll mention that I do not know much about the conventions of romance as a genre. Aside from that, the premise is an interesting one - ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Zombie.0

    Okay, I love zombie flicks, although I've never read a zombie paperback, but I like the human story that usually underlies the best of the "Zombie Apocalypse" plotlines. It may ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Solving for X

    Well like an idiot i went and clicked on the spoiler button before i read the piece, but I still think there's enough for the reader to grasp who Dorian ...

    Jul 22, 2011


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