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Re: Cataclysm
Thanks Amelia! :) I know, i know - as I was writing it i'm just like "keep cramming ambiguous things in there" and really it ties with what I was ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Cataclysm
Read this. Hey readers and reviewers! This is my entry in the 250 word story contest "Beginning of the End". Basically the first word in the story had to be ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: The End Is A New Beginning
Okay I really liked this. No, I am not religious - in fact I see religion as the solution to the fear of death a mass of fool's desperately cling ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Virus irruption (extended)
Okay. First, "Eruption". Above reviewer's right, unless you intentionally misspelled the word for the sake of title appeal or something. Second, good job with this beginning. There were quite a ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Failed contest entry
They're the ones who told me to post here, in this exact manner, so yeah.
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Failed contest entry
Contest entry: Contest page: Topic id: 85824 Sorry, first time entering a competition and misunderstood the submission process. I posted my entry in a forum rather than on the contest ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned for only raising one eyebrow.
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows ~
Okay, I love good metaphors and I quite like this. I'm not going to put a lot of energy into nitpicking grammatical errors or identifying confusing imagery, because I'm tired ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Discontented
Hi Ashjoy. I'm going to first make the point that poetry and I have a bad history (see index, p.35), at least when it comes to appreciating structure and stanza ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: (150 WORDS) Contest Submission
Thank you all for the reviews. Chosenofair, sorry I don't know if you got confused or something but i don't have a signature, and "Parsons" was the ID of the ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: (150 WORDS) Contest Submission
PARSONS There “Parsons” stood, caked in dust and engulfed by plumes of industrial smoke, which crawled upwards from amongst the thousands of workers on the metal grating below. My gaze ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Greetings. I am also a "newb". Please don't hesitate to give me a review or ask for me to review your work. Love to get the "creative juices flowing". Cool ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Angel Chapter 1
Before I type anything, I'll mention that I do not know much about the conventions of romance as a genre. Aside from that, the premise is an interesting one - ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Zombie.0
Okay, I love zombie flicks, although I've never read a zombie paperback, but I like the human story that usually underlies the best of the "Zombie Apocalypse" plotlines. It may ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Solving for X
Well like an idiot i went and clicked on the spoiler button before i read the piece, but I still think there's enough for the reader to grasp who Dorian ...
Jul 22, 2011
