JSPike

Again, wonderful humour! I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors, so all good there! Like 'Pink' said, it's hard to review these in a critical way, especially as people ...

Done! :)

Hey, here's that review you requested: That forgettable face blending in with the crowd the one that rarely speaks never boisterous, never loud Your use of enjambment is good here, ...

Thanks for all the reviews guys! Hopefuly it's starting to improve from the original now. :) @Jenna: Sorry about the lines in between the stanzas. There there because otherwise it ...

Both done! Keep 'em coming! :D

Hey, requested review coming right up! Considering you said this was only your second attempt at poetry this was great! The anger floods into me Filling me up, over flowing ...

Hey, requested review coming right up! The dancer stumbles out the back door and into the alleyway. He leans against it, and as it closes the sounds of music and ...

Hello there! Feel free to request reviews here. I'll get them done as soon as I can, taking into account school and what-not! :) What I will review: Any poetry,* ...

Yet again Ben, a piece of wonderful comic wit from you. :) I loved the ending, it was genius! :) It seemed to drag on a bit in places though, ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! Just for heads up, it's always good to run the spell checker before posting, and to go over it a couple of times yourself. For instance: ...

Hey, Do you mind reviewing this for me? Revolution Thanks. :D JSPike.

Thanks again everyone for the reviews! They're much appreciated! :D I've made quite a few changes and everything. Hopefully the punctuation isn't so sloppy now. :lol:

Hey, First off, some suggestions: The sky was gray ; although it wasn't cloudy . But it had been a sunny day, very bright and warm, this morning. It looked ...

Hey! :) Look to the moon. On a night where the clouds appear as a painting, Captured in a still frame. When your breath is the only movement, (Full stop?) ...

Hey, do you mind reviewing my poem? Carpe Diem (We will not be forgotten) Thanks. Oh, and harsh reviews are welcome! :D