JSPike

Well, I don't normally venture into Romantic Fiction, but I saw that you had no reviews yet! :wink: As always, I'll get the nitpicking done first: Hoarse shouts of the ...

First off, sorry I've been away so long! I've been rather busy. Anyway, thanks for all the comments! :) They're appreciated. @Curiousvampire: I'm thrilled that you're inspired to look at ...

Hi Mo. Can you review this please? :D Evil Knows No Limits It's historical fiction, but I'm not bothered about the historical part! Tear it apart if you want, I ...

:lol: Well done! I loved the bit about turning 16, and the "homework avoidance". Good stuff. I always enjoy reading humour when I can relate to it! Like all of ...

Thanks for the comment. :) I see what you mean about the first sentence, it does seem like a bit of a ramble. I'll edit it when I have the ...

[I've rated this 16+ just in case] I wrote this for History h/w. Feel free to rip it to shreds, especially as I haven't given it in yet. --- Evil ...

Wow, great work. :) I really liked this, especially Darrian, he was very sinister! Make sure you check over your work though before you post. In quite a few places ...

Whoa, no offence, but my head certainly was swimming with all those rhymes. :lol: As said, you unnecessarily restrict yourself by using an AAA rhyme scheme, and even more so ...

Hey there! Just to give you some heads up, this is my first real read of a true piece of "Romantic Fiction" and my attempt at reviewing some, but it ...

Hi everyone, this is a (major) revision of the original: Carpe Diem Feedback is much appreciated. We Will Not Be Forgotten Life, such a meaningless thing. It passes from light ...

Hi everyone! :mrgreen: I have recently endeavoured to create a website and start up a writing competition 'business'. I just thought you guys might be interested in hearing about it, ...

Hi! I really liked this. Especially the repetition in the rhyme. It's so often easy to mess up a poem by concentrating on rhyming it, but you've done this very ...

Hi there! This is wonderful stuff. You certainly had me gripped me until the very end. I can't wait to ream more. :) I do have one very small nitpick ...

Well done! I love historical fiction, especially Roman, and I hope you win that competition! :D You seem to have researched this brilliantly, and that really shows. Your writing seems ...

Hello! :mrgreen: My actions are not a cry for help, For if I wanted help I would just ask. I really liked this stanza, I love how it contrasts with ...