JJxVoodo

Hey, in not too long this stuff about the brothers and the dream will make sence. You will start to get a feel about why I put the dream in ...

Hey, thank-you to everyone that replyed. Don't worry, there is more to the realationship between Miranda and Leanne than I have said, you are going to have to keep reading ...

Hey, I really liked this. Short but sweet. I liked best the part where it said how the laughter turns to silence. It's the bit I can picture the most ...

Hey. i thought this was brill. I can just feel the emotion in this piece. I don't think I have any critisisms about this. It was beautifully written. Keep writing-good ...

Hey, I thought this was brill. It took me a couple of reads to understand it but it was probably just me. Maybe the language was just too much for ...

Hey, I think that this was very good, sounds like somebody else I know Me It was an excelent piece and i would love to read more work like this. ...

Hi, I think this was so beautiful. I could feel the saddness and the hurt that this must have inspired. I think the wording was brilliant. But, the only thing ...

Hey, these are the first 3 chapters of my romance novel. Could you review? Thank-you JJxVoodo

Hey, thank-you all for the help guys. I have posted Chapters 2 and 3 as well. I hope you like these or at least think I did better :) I ...

Hey, thank-you for the help on this. I think you would make a great English teacher ;) With the clues they are going to come later on in the book. ...

The jittery bus stuttered to a halt at the terminus: my stop. I gradually found my feet and walked, slowly and steadily, down the isle of seats to the doors ...

Lol. This was brilliant. I hope after practice I can be that good ;) I loved it all! Keep writing and good luck JJxVoodo

All I can think to say is... WOW! It's so true, it's scary! I could really relate to these emotions in the character's head. Love can be such a crazy ...

Hey, I loved this. It is something, as a new teen, I can easily relate to. I could just picture it in my head. Keep writing JJxVoodo Also I am ...

Hey, thanks for replying. I really apreciate the help you have given me and don't worry, I need you to be harsh. You are helping me and that's what matters ...