JJxVoodo

I loved this loads The only thing I can pick at is A glistening angel ,upon the snow; other than that it's great Keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo

I liked this. Most people I know always badmouth the scouts so it's nice to hear someone that is speaking up about this certain sterotype. I think this piece has ...

This was good. I liked the very end of it. I think you have great potential as a poet and should keep on doing what you are doing Keep writing- ...

This was brilliant. I really liked it. I can't wait to see where this story is taken. I want to know more about this mysterious Nazi character from the ally. ...

Excelent. It was great. I got the plot quite quickly and you can feel emotion inside. You have great potential to become a great writer Keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo

Loved it. Your rhythm was excellent. I understood the plot instantly and I think you have true potential. Keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo

It was no silly excuse for a poem. It was great :) I picked up that it was about a couple and the only way to save him was for ...

Love it... LOve it... LOVe it... LOVE it... LOVE It... LOVE IT! It was brill. I think it is quiet humorouss but realistic at the same time. I really loved ...

Hey, the title really grabbed me in but I am not sure of the plot. It all seems a bit confussing. It might be just me but I have no ...

I loved this one too! It was truely brilliant. I loved the bit where the character had to quickly react so the mother never got too angry :) Keep writing- ...

I loved it all. I am new to writing so I am not that good at reviewing yet so I am just going to give you praise. It was excelent. ...

Hey, I loved this. It was really great. I personally think you have mountains of potential. Keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo

Hey, this was probably one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. You have practically summed up my feelings and emotions over the past 2 weeks. I am ...

I didn't get what you were saying really. I liked it in a strange way but I didn't understand half the words in there. Maybe you should have a bit ...

God yeah! Keep it up! It sounds epic! Please keep writing it. I want to know so much more. Please keep writing it. Please keep writing- good luck JJxVoodo