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Re: Free
Wild and free, like a bird of the tree. [I don't think this should rhyme. It immediately turned me off from it, and you didn't continue throughout the whole poem.] ...
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Re: The Ultimate Word Game
*JFW, the s and e are touching...haha.* Eh...opps? Blame the time...I went and fixed it now. ;P Remember (If the last letter is last, do I need to use the ...
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Re: Readers Crit
If you have time, I'd love a review on this. It looks long, but it's really just a lot of short paragraphs, so... If you want a review, please let ...
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Re: Alainna's happy to help...
All done, honey. Wow, that crit was my first blue star. Yay. Keep them coming guys! Alainna xxx Thank you! And congrats on your blue star. :wink: [s]I feel bad ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Just High School
Hello, Jinxeh! It looks like you're new, so welcome to YWS! You'll become so addicted you'll never be able to leave - it's awesome. :wink: (Oh, and congrats on winning ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: I Must Do More!
It's empty, so... Thanks! ~JFW1415
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Alainna's happy to help...
You said you wanted more, so... Thanks a million! ~JFW1415
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Cyber Bullying
Woah...This is happening to me right now. (Shameless plug to my blog.) My mom's talking to the police as I type this, and I'm not allowed to go to school ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: How long is/was your longest story?
FanFiction (not on here): 24,406 words (so far.) Regular: About 5,000. I REALLY need to write a novel...Jeez! I'm stuck in the short stories phase. ~JFW1415
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Promises Not Kept (Part One of Three)
Yay! I love your reviews! *Hugs* I'm terrified at the aspect of fixing this up, but still, I love them! :wink: Sam: I've finally got a famous review from you! ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Guilty
Very interesting. I see someone else caught the grammar, so I'll skip that. One small thing: when 'I' say that 'I' can't help it if 'I' stutter, I think 'I' ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: The Critique Boutique
I'd LOVE a review on this... Really; your critiques are amazing. O.o It seems you have many in-depth reviews on the pieces you showed us you'd like more on. If ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: The Doctor Is In
I have always dreamed of getting a critique from you, ever since I saw your first one. (Seriously. It's pathetic, but still...) I will be forever grateful. Want a review ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Yoyo's Crit Requests
Congrats on the job! (Becoming an Instructor.) Now, to make you regret you ever got it...heehee. Feel free to ask for a review in exchange! I'm trying to get another ...
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Re: Rydia's Reviews
*Pokes* Want more work? ;P ~JFW1415
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