JFW1415

I glanced through your comments to see if you had any real ones (again, only one,) and I noticed that you said you can’t remember it all. This is to ...

I'd take the survey! I agree with Perra with the ads, but I think that it should link to a certain aticle, and switch when you change pages, so more ...

Aw, you only have one good review! Well, like always, I shall critique as if this isn’t you. At the end, I will rant and rave about how awful it ...

Boon, have I ever told you how much I love you? I mean, really, look at this! 500 words! You are too amazing for words. ;P Before I begin, I ...

Science! All the colours and the bangs and the fizzes! I don't have colors or bangs or fizzes. I have rocks. O.o I HATE Earth science. Maybe the next years ...

I've already told you I know nothing of poetry, so don't expect this to be helpful. ;P One thing I noticed: the punctuation is off. I don't know enough about ...

I would say English, but my teacher STINKS this year. I have an AMAZING social studies teacher, who made me like the class for the first time this year, so ...

The way I see it, is the form of rejection. If it is denied due to say, 'There are already 5 active storybooks on the go', then I would have ...

*Shurgs* I'll be at work, so I'll live. ;P Thanks for the update! But why'd you change your avatar? O.o ~JFW1415

Thanks people! That all really helped! Am I insane, or is there a different kind of waiting room? I remember one in the front of a hospital, where you can ...

Hmm...I'll try to come up with something while I wait for sleep to come, okay? I'll talk to you tomorrow, just PM me if I forget. :wink: ~JFW1415

Marie: Just leave me a request in my 'Want a Critique?' thread (link in my siggy.) I don't have time now, but I do give VERY detailed reviews. I just ...

Wow; I went from nothing to review to 19 pieces plus anything of gryfs, all in one day! Woot! ;P Feel free to post anything else . I will get ...

Tell me if I'm wrong, but last time I checked there wasn't a short fiction forum. Other Fiction seemed the best place to post this. *Hits head* And that would ...

Hello! The numbers next to the highlighted piece correspond with the numbered 'highlighted comments' below. Look out: it's long! (And took me an hour! Jeez...) Pages one and two down ...