JFW1415

This has now been edited. Please give more critique! It's due soon! ~JFW1415

It says I have friends waiting to be approved, but whenever I click on the link I get the Sticks 'this page does not exist' page. IE, 4:67 GMT-4 ~JFW1415

Thanks JFW, these are your stories about the girl with Matty as her brother? I've been wanting to know where you've been getting the prompts for ages! If you asked ...

Being critical of your work is, in my opinion, actually damaging to your work. It doesn't help at all when you've got an inner editor hovering over your shoulder while ...

Go here: I'm doing that right now. It's on LJ, and you write 100 short stories around one or two main characters. It really helps with character development. I'm too ...

It seems really good. It's late now, so I can't go in-depth, but I did notice one thing. You said that he had already taken in over half of what ...

Turns out I was wrong. The sentence was 'Sometimes the name they give you is all wrong.' It was from . *Shrug* Sorry, the sentence just sounded a bit familiar. ...

This won't be helpful, but I wanted to leave a comment. Beautiful. You captured the emotions so well. The grief, the need to laugh despite the circumstances, the dry humor ...

No clue. My family and I don't save papers. :shock: I know that my 5th grade teacher made to show several pages of a story and a lot of pages ...

This is for that contest...thing, isn't it? Where they give you the first sentence? If so, let us know. At first I thought you stole this from someone. :wink: Honestly? ...

Proper grammar/capitalization, please. :wink: I always am critical of my own work, but I think that's a good thing. We don't lecture you for hours on your writing for you ...

Last night, my dad and I came up with a good idea. These might just be marketable at the next Comicon. Tell me, if these were done a little better, ...

Ok...this seems to be floundering. Are people lost, disinterested, or lacking in time? Of we can see what the problems are we can work on fixing them... The last one. ...

I use the computer. It's much faster than handwriting and somehow seems to flow more for me. It's also easier to edit on the computer and the writing is much ...

I find it a lot easier to write with a pencil in my hand. I like to write outside, or in a quiet place. It really helps get rid of ...