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*Pokes* Me! Me! I think people somewhat know my name now... :wink: ~JFW1415

I finally finished! Sorry, I didn't get the chance to get back on the computer last night, and was at school all day today. :roll: The numbers next to the ...

Hello! Your piece is short and I'm procrastinating, so here you go! The numbers next to the highlighted parts correspond with the numbered comments below. Highlighted Comments 1. I personally ...

Hey. I realize this was posted a while ago, and you've already turned it in, but I read it and wanted to comment. Thanks for the review! I'm not turning ...

Other than that, the same comments as before - more description and emotion wouldn't hurt. You haven't made that many changes so I'll not comment further but good work so ...

Here you go! The numbers next to the highlighted parts correspond with the 'highlighted comments' below. Highlighted Comments 1. I’d ditch this word. It’s awkward, and kind of sounds like ...

This is due really soon, and has three parts. Could you please do this soon? I'm not looking for a really detailed critique. I just need someone to glance at ...

[s] Revised version of He's Just Human . Three parts. Due soon. I'm desperate. Please? Thanks so much! ~JFW1415[/s] It's passed in, and now I'm going to actually spend time ...

Revised version of He's Just Human . It's due soon - can you give it a quick glance? Thanks so much! ~JFW1415

Revised version of He's Just Human . It's due soon - can you give it a quick glance? Thanks! ~JFW1415

There are three parts, and it's due soon. Can you look at them quickly/relook at them? (I can't remember if you read it before I edited...) Thanks! ~JFW1415

I've revised He's Just Human ! Could you give it a quick glance? It's due soon... Thanks! ~JFW1415

There are three parts, and it's due soon. Could you check it over really quickly? Thanks so much! ~JFW1415

This has been updated, and has a new title. Please critique! This is due soon. :shock: ~JFW1415

[s]This has been edited, and has a new title. Please critique! This is due soon. :shock: ~JFW1415[/s] Edit: I edited once more. The version that is posted now is the ...