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Reida! You're so pretty! *Steals flowers* Do you/someone you know work in a movie theater? My brother does, and he has a lot of posters like that. :) ~JFW1415

Thanks for the review! I'm actually going to rework this a lot. I hate how it is now, and have several suggestions on how to make it less essay-like and ...

Apologies, Jf, give me a holler any time you want me to look at it again. No problem. :wink: I just asked a million people, figuring someone would look it ...

O.o Wow, Saint. Just...wow. ~JFW1415

Awesome. I'll definately try it. Although I'm odd - I do these after writing the story. My characters come to life as I write, and, when I do these first, ...

The rant is gone! ;P Same format as always. Highlighted Comments 1. Is he thinking this? If so, italicize. 2. I’d prefer it if he said this, rather than the ...

The only thing based off of the show is the powers/abilities the characters use and one of the enemies. Still, if you even doubt this, I would change it. The ...

*Yes now thats true...*noone likes to look at my work that much...* Banned for making no sense! Just because people don't review your work doesn't mean you can't review theirs! ...

Ever hear of word wars? They're pretty fun. Find a partner (I'm always available,) and you both write for a set amount of time, usually about fifteen minutes. Then you ...

Banned for having so few reviews! ~JFW1415

Thanks sooooo much!!!!!! Sorry about the confusion at first i wanted general, but then i realized that I phrased it wrong and I guess i sort of changed my mind ...

She collapsed in the garden, her arms on a stone bench with her head buried in them and wept. And then—a flash of light! She lifted her head to see— ...

I bundled my too-large, second-hand coat around myself as I paused on the path back into the orphanage. The main bulk of the dormitories loomed to my right, and behind ...

But this would not be easy, for n either us n or the girl. I'm pretty sure that's needed... Alaye put out a delicate hand and touched the girl’s forehead ...

That was so great! It's amazing how real characters can seem to a reader. I'm certainly glad you got a good grade on it - it was wonderful. My only ...