JFW1415

I edited once more. The version that is posted now is the one I turned in. I am still planning on fixing the emotions, hospital scene, etc. - all the ...

I edited once more. The version that is posted now is the one I turned in. I am still planning on fixing the emotions, hospital scene, etc. - all the ...

A lovely in-depth critique to convince you to stay? :P Make sure you give warnings when you rate something ‘R.’ It's not a rule, but some people will read stuff ...

On nearly all my works I get the comments about apostrophies, but it's simply the way I write XD so I'm not really planning on changing it. I just prefer ...

Here you go! ~JFW1415

I wonder if guilt caught up on him. Leading him to confess. It can happen. Most likely from seeing his granddaughter/daughter in a coma. (I've finally read the actual article!) ...

That is awful! I can't believe anyone would do something like that! I don't see why the man confessed, though. He'll go to jail for life. Also, I wonder how ...

Hello again! Same format as always. Highlighted Comments 1. Maybe show how sudden this is? 2. Ellipses are generally not good, and this is no exception. I would reword this ...

I have a feeling this site doesn't like the type of stuff I mostly write. Probably was a bad idea to join. Why do you say that? I just looked ...

Hello! Here's the critique I promised. ;P Just a warning: this is really long. Feel free to completely ignore me - I can be harsh. :oops: The numbers next to ...

Welcome to YWS! It's very addicting - you'll love it. You're writing a novel, eh? What's it about? PM me if you'd like any critiques. I'm not good at poetry, ...

Welcome back! I never met you before, but hopefully I'll see you around this time! PM me if you need any critiques - I'm always looking to do more! :wink: ...

Welcome! I never joined TYWC. I just got into writing when I joined this site, which was after the old one shut down, so there wasn't any point. PM when ...

Welcome to YWS! It's addicting - you'll love it! Anyways, don't worry about Writer's Block - we all get it. Ever hear of nanowrimo ? It really helps get rid ...

Hey CJ! Welcome to YWS! It's addicting - you'll love it. Do you mind being called CJ? If not, you may want to let us know before you officially become ...