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  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You!

    Banned for not believing that there is a logic to it. :wink: ~JFW1415

    May 3, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Burned

    Here you go. :wink: Again, I'll only get like, 10 points for this since I'm posting an attachment, but oh, well. It saves a bit of time. Good luck, and ...

    May 3, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Shiner

    JFW: Very helpful. I didn't even realize my sentences were that long. You can tell I'm bad at ages though..Also, Henry is twelve not ten. But thanks for pointing out ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You!

    Banned for being way too active in this thread. ~JFW1415

    May 3, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Write for Squills!

    Then I should be able to get something written, even if I don't go with my original plan. I'll start typing soon! ~JFW1415

    May 3, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Lone Wolf

    Ahh! I bought this! I'm just way too lazy to finish it, and lost the tug thingy... Haha, now people know that there was a key telling you where to ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Write for Squills!

    I have an idea running around in my head... When do I need to submit it by? I will try to write it tomorrow, but I'll want to edit it ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Swearing In Stories

    JFW: Sometimes harsh words are the best fit for harsh situations, no? Perhaps you have not merely encountered a situation that you deem it necessary to use anything else. Another ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter 5 of Wrong or Right

    Jeez...what's with all your 'write more now!' reviews? *Shrug* Ah, well, you're still getting real ones from me, unless you complain. Same format as always. Highlighted Comments 1. Who’s talking? ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter 4 of Wrong or Right

    Why is it that all of your threads are beginning to look like they're supposed to be on FictionPress? *Shrug* Ah, well, hopefully you still like my detailed critiques. Same ...

    May 3, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Shiner

    Hello! In your blog you said you needed more critiques, so here I am! Enjoy! The numbers next to the highlighted text correspond with the 'highlighted comments' below. Highlighted Comments ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Novel Workshop Re: The Darkness Within

    Haha; I was going to tell you to put it here instead when I thought about critiquing it. :wink: I'll get to it, but bug me if I forget, 'kay? ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Snow Photo 1

    LOL ! the specks are snowflakes !! it was snowing :D I agree, im glad the snow is gone too: bring on the summer !! :D XxxDo But...there are brown ...

    May 2, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Gate of Glendon- Chapters 3 & 4

    I'm back! Without my famous (hopefully :P) review, though, since it's not needed. Chapter Three After dinner everyone went back into the parlour. I looked up at the clock o ...

    May 2, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Gate of Glendon- Chapters 1 & 2

    Just a quick review, as I am short on time and promised these ages ago. :wink: Chapter One They also had a baby brother who spent most o f his ...

    May 2, 2008


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