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Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for not believing that there is a logic to it. :wink: ~JFW1415
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Burned
Here you go. :wink: Again, I'll only get like, 10 points for this since I'm posting an attachment, but oh, well. It saves a bit of time. Good luck, and ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: The Shiner
JFW: Very helpful. I didn't even realize my sentences were that long. You can tell I'm bad at ages though..Also, Henry is twelve not ten. But thanks for pointing out ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for being way too active in this thread. ~JFW1415
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Write for Squills!
Then I should be able to get something written, even if I don't go with my original plan. I'll start typing soon! ~JFW1415
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Lone Wolf
Ahh! I bought this! I'm just way too lazy to finish it, and lost the tug thingy... Haha, now people know that there was a key telling you where to ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Write for Squills!
I have an idea running around in my head... When do I need to submit it by? I will try to write it tomorrow, but I'll want to edit it ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Swearing In Stories
JFW: Sometimes harsh words are the best fit for harsh situations, no? Perhaps you have not merely encountered a situation that you deem it necessary to use anything else. Another ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 5 of Wrong or Right
Jeez...what's with all your 'write more now!' reviews? *Shrug* Ah, well, you're still getting real ones from me, unless you complain. Same format as always. Highlighted Comments 1. Who’s talking? ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 4 of Wrong or Right
Why is it that all of your threads are beginning to look like they're supposed to be on FictionPress? *Shrug* Ah, well, hopefully you still like my detailed critiques. Same ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: The Shiner
Hello! In your blog you said you needed more critiques, so here I am! Enjoy! The numbers next to the highlighted text correspond with the 'highlighted comments' below. Highlighted Comments ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: The Darkness Within
Haha; I was going to tell you to put it here instead when I thought about critiquing it. :wink: I'll get to it, but bug me if I forget, 'kay? ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Snow Photo 1
LOL ! the specks are snowflakes !! it was snowing :D I agree, im glad the snow is gone too: bring on the summer !! :D XxxDo But...there are brown ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: The Gate of Glendon- Chapters 3 & 4
I'm back! Without my famous (hopefully :P) review, though, since it's not needed. Chapter Three After dinner everyone went back into the parlour. I looked up at the clock o ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: The Gate of Glendon- Chapters 1 & 2
Just a quick review, as I am short on time and promised these ages ago. :wink: Chapter One They also had a baby brother who spent most o f his ...
May 2, 2008
