JFW1415

Hello! You're not very talkative, are you? :wink: What would you like us to call you? What do you like to write? To read? What's your favorite food? We're all ...

Welcome to YWS! If you ever need a critique, PM me or post in my 'Want a Critique?' thread (in my signature, down there.) Also, PM me if you need ...

*Pokes amber, then points to spellcheck* Anyways, I hate it when I post things too fast together. If I post something, I often edit it, and it deletes what I ...

bob, you are mad. I second that. :wink: Can I go over there and steal your trees? They're puuuurty... ~JFW1415

*Points to choco* Look to her for nit-picks. I actually just stumbled across this and wasn't planning on critiquing, so I wasn't looking - at all. You got me hooked, ...

I notice your "chapter 23" rule but chapter two has completely different characters and setting from chapter one and three and It'd be helpful if you could look at 3 ...

When it comes to really good teen books, I think the only difference between them and books marketed to adults should be the age of your main character. The exception ...

*Nods* I like your critiques! It's called Repercussions. Part One Part Two I have a bad habbit at starting many sentences with a proper noun or a pronoun, and I ...

I usually write for teens, as I am a teen myself. I haven't read many adult books, so I'm not used to the style, and, honestly, it doesn't appeal to ...

*Pokes* Part One Part Two I'm kind of confused by your names (it's late,) so I'll describe what I need. No grammar/spelling - I can catch that myself. (I just ...

You know you love me. :wink: A new story - Repercussions. Part One Part Two Thanks! ~JFW1415

Don't know if you're still checking this, but I'd love one on my new story: Part One Part Two You can ignore the previous one if you don't have time. ...

The promised critique! Nit-Picks His strong pronounced [s]cheek bones[/s] cheekbones and deep brown eyes kept [s]eping[/s] her spell bound. She was entranced by the massive power of the horse beneath ...

Don’t worry – I was good this time! I didn’t read the critiques until after finished my critique. When I did, though, I saw many lines that have been improved ...

That’s for the thanks. ;P You know, when I first started this, I stupidly thought there would only be eight pieces. Then I got to number eight, and saw that ...