JFW1415

Honestly, I doubt it would be organized. Think about it: people wouldn't agree. They'd be angry about the circumstances, upset about lost ones. They'd be hysteric. Lot's of people would ...

I'm back! :lol: One Nit-Pick: Yes, yes, everything’s fine, said Galen weakly, but deeply. Urgh; don’t use ‘ly’ words! Especially not two in a row. Overall Fantasy I’m not sure ...

Hello again! Nit-Picks “Here are your keycards,” said Mom after she and Dad talked to the man behind the counter. She handed Joe one and me one. “Rebecca, don't leave ...

1. How many children in your family? Two: my older brother, John, and me. 2. How old is each child? John is 17, and I'm 14. 3. Are your parents ...

Hey Nick! I'm JFW1415 - call me anything you'd like, I'll respond. ;P But what should we call you? Nick? Some form of your username? Random dude? Bass guitar? That's ...

This is awful. It's so hard to think of so many people dying. 500,000 people seems like an enormous number - I don't even know that many people. To let ...

Hey Jared! What up me home boy? *Cough* A lame attempt to be cool right there… Anyways, here’s my critique, as per request. I told you it wouldn’t be helpful, ...

Simple: word wars! Find a friend (I'm always available) and write for a set amount of time (usually 15 minutes.) Then compare word counts. You can also play with yourself, ...

Other then what everyone else already pointed out. You also need to capatilize letters after a period. And when in dialoge after someone finishes a sentence put a period, not ...

Okay. Don't you hate it when you work so hard on a story, know its imperfect and expect at least a half-hearted critique? So you finally get a review and ...

Except, his evilness will turn on him! See, since everybody is so confused by it, you, Nate, can't be sure whether the people who rated it high really meant high, ...

Part One Part Two Please? They feel so...lonely. :( ~JFW1415

:D Sweetness! A customer! I'm already halfway through the Part One, but if it takes me more than two or three days to finish both of them, I'll pm you ...

I loved it! It's so simple, the items so perfect. Maybe rearrange the flower? Right now the stem is falling off a bit, and it's bothering me. Also, I think ...

I'll whisper it in your ear *Most of YWS-ians ARE nerdy.* Yeah, I second that. :wink: Welcome to YWS! Check out JabberHut - she's a monster at grammer. PM me ...