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*Sigh* Haven't you guys ever heard of 'an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind?' Same thing applies here. Sure, they did something awful, but we shouldn't stoop ...

Aw, it's all over? Anyways, I'm too lazy to do a normal critique, so here it goes! Boring old quotes! Nit-Picks Smirking, I walked out of Chad’s house, lugging my ...

I'm baaack! :lol: The rest didn't have any comments. Highlighted Comments 1. Dash instead. 2. Reword, a lot. Maybe show Steven stand up from leaning? And no ‘now’ – it’s ...

Welcome, Scorp. :wink: I'm adding a bit to Sam's post, if she doesn't mind. :) Critiques are actually pretty easy. (I know - shocking!) The thing is, even when you ...

Well, this goes to anyone who has previously posted or will post in the future. I'm shouting, since this has to be heard throughout several pages. :lol: Hello, and welcome ...

Oh - I love you're name! Teo sounds so cool! Anyways, welcome to YWS. *Waves* We're all pretty friendly around here (as you can see.) I don't think many of ...

Don't worry - most people rather have harsh critiques than fluffy ones. And if they don't, they can leave and go to fictionpress. Anyways, welcome to the site! You didn't ...

*Poke* Short much? Haha, I love it – the shorter the better! (Heehee, I’m lazy…) Anyways, on to the critique! Highlighted Comments 1. Show us instead. Also, don’t say ‘just ...

I watch the UFC occasionally. My brother's more into it than I am. When I'm on the computer and he comes down to watch it in the living room, I ...

Yeah, I second sunshine. I tend to avoid gross movies. I actually haven't seen many at all...yet sometimes I watch them anyway. I have a strong stomach, but I don't ...

I would definately read the back cover. It sounds like it's about a woman, probably mid-twenties and single, who has had a lot of troubles - probably lot's of recent ...

But yeah. For that, bre adventurous! Are we trying to kill me? XD Haha, poor Jabbs. *Hugs* Anyways, I'm a strong believer in this. One word sentences, or paragraphs? So ...

I have a book that I love, but I'm too lazy to go find it and tell you about it. Maybe later? But I love podcasts. Go on iTunes, and ...

I never do, but I'm finding they actually work. For example, I started a fanfiction a long time ago, well before I started YWS. It's not nearly finished, and I ...

Rude: No. Freaky: Isn't everyone? :) Anyways, welcome to YWS. I'm sure you'll love it - we're all a bit freaky here. Mmmm...bananas are yummy! Now I want to go ...