JFW1415

Hey Jared! So, you PMed me about this piece a while ago…four days ago, in fact. It definitely looks interesting, so I’m glad you did. I wanted to apologize for ...

I once saw a sign that said "eat here and get gas." instead of "eat here, and get gas." Eh, commas are tricky. Many people will argue that what they ...

Icaruss is definitely right. However, you still need to be careful. Make the characters sound real, but reading: "Oh my god, he's like, so totally cute, and I like, totally ...

Can you ask multiple reviewers at once to critique your story? I just did this with four or five people, and I'm afraid I might get in trouble.. I'm paranoid.. ...

Hello! You asked for a critique, so here it is! Nit-Picks Listen, my love, I have a story to tell. One with bloodthirsty creatures from hell. With war, with famine, ...

Hey guys! It seems I'm falling pretty behind in my critiquing, as well as my writing. I've been struggling to catch up, but I never can. So, I'm not accepting ...

Using FrontPage may help. You can add tables, images, and all that fun stuff normally. Then you can click the HTML page, and it shows you the code for everything ...

And now she has long fingernails apparently. They sure grow fast. ~JFW1415

*Poke* Shouldn't this be in Writer's Corner? Also, as I haven't read your story, I have no idea. Maybe try these: - Put it away and work on something else. ...

In relation to what Adam said, there's a really awesome quote: Statistics show that 58% of our language is body language. 37% is paralanguage (tone of voice.) That leaves only ...

Awesome! Maybe I'll get inspiration and actually write a poem one of these days...? Unlikely. But still, I feel smart reading them. :lol: You're amazing, Nate. ~JFW1415

*Poke* Haha, the one I listed was actually 'Promises Not Kept.' 'Repercussions' is the two-part one. :roll: Jeez, I should have known that... Anyways, thanks for the first review! I'm ...

Ugrh. No wonder you have no reviews – this is over 3,000 words! I usually consider 500 too much, haha. (I’m lazy. ;) ) Anyways, don’t expect this to be ...

Eh, Snoink, that just proves you've been here too long. Let the rest of us enjoy it. :wink: They have long nails? :shock: I don't like long nails... Haha ~JFW1415

Thanks for the link! I found this ages ago, then promptly forgot it. I'm glad you reminded me. :) Good luck to all who enter! (If anyone wins anything, they ...