JFW1415

Hey Bittersweet! I've already seen you around - looks like you'll be a great addition to the site. :wink: 180 pages? Jeez - that's long! What's it about? When'd you ...

Hey Abbey! I see you've begun to settle into the site. An awesome avatar (chocolate milk!) a critique, several posts. It's an awesome site, huh? Just a quick warning - ...

I personally like using line breaks here. Like this: ----- It shows that you're either switching POV or changing the time. As long as you show that time has elapsed ...

*Poke* Isn't this the third time this has been posted...? ~JFW1415

Haha, you guys kind of missed the point. :wink: You're supposed to come up with a few of your absolute favorite names. Otherwise we might as well go on any ...

Hey! Here's the promised critique. Sorry for taking so long! Nit-Picks I never really knew why , on your graduation, you threw your hat in to the air. I suppose ...

Haha, that's a good tip. Another reason why it's good to have others look at your work. If you thought you were correct, the critiquer will point it out for ...

That's so awesome! But what's the average age of active members? Seems more like 15/16 to me. ~JFW1415

*Poke* You're supposed to tell me when you post something, XxxDo! ;) Nit-Picks Aaron laughed with us, hiccupping as he wiped the tears out of his eyes. “Dude , that ...

...You can't dig through the Earth... Okay, no gravity? I suppose I'd fall off the Earth into space, having been going at such a fast speed to dig through. *Shrug* ...

there some reason I can't see the new formatting? ~JFW1415 EDIT: Now I can. When this first came out I couldn't. I'm not too fond of it, but I suppose ...

Hey! You spelled my name wrong! Haha, glad I forced you to write this. :wink: But you're supposed to PM me when you do, remember? Nit-Picks Oh , God, please ...

*Poke* I have one half-done, I should be able to finish it in time. It's just a writing tip, and I don't know if it's good enough, but it's something. ...

37. Cuss often and for no reason and rate it G. The more vulgar the better. ~JFW1415

PS: Whoah - this is seriously you, Jared? No offense, but I like Fat Boy better. This is a completely different style - I didn't even remember it was you ...