JFW1415

:shock: Have you always been purple? If not, congrats! If so...blame it on the freaky Tuesday that feel like a Friday! :roll: Part One Part Two Part Three You know ...

I have to add this: don't use too many cliffhangers. Us readers need a break once in a while! Anyways, I'll echo the repetition thing. That really works. The whole: ...

*Poke* Part One Part Two Rip it to shreds? ~JFW1415

Part One Part Two Please? I'm in love with your critiques. ~JFW1415

Hey Icaruss! I read this a while ago, and I loved it – I even gave you a gold star! I’m just getting around to critiquing it, though, and am ...

I'd hate that! Most teachers know who's dating who - they don't need a list. In my school, the teachers don't really care if we hug our friends, but they ...

This is bad. Four months sounds about right. But 'evil', 'henious,' and 'outrageous?' Come on. I'm currently deployed to a country where the brutal dictator murdered 500,000 of his own ...

Haha, I'm not too fond of SciFi. But maybe you can convince me to give you a critique anyway...? :) Well, I feel bad for the lack of welcomers, so ...

Wow...you've gotten a lot of smilies. :shock: Anyways, welcome to YWS! While I may not be an awesome greeter, I am pretty accustomed to the site, and kind of live ...

Hey! It's late, but this is short, so you get a quick review. :) Nit-Picks It wasn’t a very complicated matter, if one really thought it over. Yet Aslina didn’t ...

Before I Critique Hey KJ! I’m so sorry I took so long. To make up for it, I’ll just skip the rambles and send this in. Also, the comments were ...

Hey History! I saw this a while ago, but didn’t have time to critique it. Now I’m back, and, though I should be writing, this is short, so I shall ...

I have a question. One of the moderators told me I shouldn't write in school because then, I won't have anything to write about. She said I should just observe ...

I have IE 7 and it works for me. Dunno if that's helpful. *shrug* Anyway. After a quick survey in Chat, it seems I'm not the only one that's missing ...

Hey Jared! Thanks for letting me know about this. :) Nit-Picks As soon as I stepped through the door after school, my mom threw me into our small car and ...