JFW1415

I made my goal! Five days early. :) ~JFW1415

*Cries* But...but...but there's no spell-check ! ~JFW1415

I'm finally catching up on my critique requests! Nit-Picks She was the only one who got a decent burial, for she was the only one who meant anything to him. ...

First off, I have to apologize – you asked for this critique ages ago, and this is the first I’ve been able to get to it. Life’s been a bit ...

The Otherthings needed to stay away, to stay buried forever deep, never to rise again. For repetition sake, I think ‘to never rise again’ would work better. Great opener, though! ...

I'm so sorry for the wait! Nit-Picks I instantly turned my gaze to the checkered floor. The devil smiled at me calmly. How’s he see her if he’s turned to ...

By the way, my portfolio looks so beautiful now. So much prettier than Sah's :P Pahh. Mine rules all. :P (Haha, I thought the same thing, Jared. :P) ~JFW1415

Hey Jiggity! Nit-Picks You can see them dancing , sometimes. This comma is needed, but it slows the sentence. I’d ditch it. I was lucky enough to see it once, ...

This piece is kind of rough still - I had to finish it up to submit it in the OneWord contest. (I got an extension, 'cause Ging is awesome.) It's ...

You're amazing. First the orders (which I already did,) and now the invisible thing? I love it! Now people won't see (well, as easily) all my really old stuff! *Cheers* ...

Eh, I'm not much help here, but I did read a book with the main character becoming blind. A fire cracker went off in front of his eyes. When they ...

Hey XxxDo! Here comes the promised critique, on time for once. The Darkness Within is a completely different story, of course, haha. No clue when I’ll get to that… My ...

*Gets thousands of cupcakes* Cupcakes are cooler than cake! Happy birthday, Nate! Haha - you're getting old. :wink: ~JFW1415

Last summer I (nearly?) got a second second degree burn. My shoulders were all molted and brown and gross. :shock: They're still a bit brown. I'm Irish, so I'm pale, ...

Good luck, Ari! We'll miss you here - you're such a great mod! Have fun, and be careful! ~JFW1415