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Re: Animal Farm
Piggie! ~JFW1415
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: School Writing Club
Check out the usergroups. Namely La Plume and Character Development. ~JFW1415
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Big Brother...
i can has more diet coke plz? kthxbai! *Dies* ~JFW1415
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Big Brother...
Heh When I worked at a Boy Scout Camp, the camp director would sometimes leave an empty soda can lying on the side of a trail, and wait to see ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: YWS Now Has Officespace!
I stole the flag again, and now have proof. :) (I procrastinate waaaay too much...) ~JFW1415
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: YWS Now Has Officespace!
*Grabs flag and runs* Heehee ~JFW1415
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: ~Michelangelo's Night and Day~Chapter One
I'm sorry my descriptions irritated you. :? I just have a habit of OVER describing things. Don't change it just because of me! Just the character descriptions - those weren't ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Dreaming
The promised critique. :) Nit-Picks I am standing on a beach, where instead of sand I squish my toes into smooth, blue, crystal like pebbles. To make this more mystical, ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: The Quoting Game
Quote this. Because I'm goody-two-shoes. You get a dime. Prok gets no dime. This is my third attempt. Please, no one beat me to the punch this time. EDIT: Yay! ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Sorry to bug you, Nate. :) I ended up clicking my name (under featured member) to get to my portfolio today, and it brought me to my old one, with ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Critiques, Anyone?
I'm reopened! Now as an Instructor! Send in those requests! ~JFW1415
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: ~Michelangelo's Night and Day~Chapter One
First off, I am so sorry I took so long to get to this. But it is so long ! Gah. Oh, well, hopefully I can finish all parts today. ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Gerrymandering (2)
I’m baaaaack! :) Nit-Picks Shuqiao sat on the steps of the capitol with her knees drawn to her chest, waiting. It was foggy and dank, the kind of weather where ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Gerrymandering (1) [edit 07/01]
So, I finally get to critique a piece by the amazingness that is Sam? Exciting. :) I’m kind of worried that I won’t find anything, but I’ll give it my ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: The Darkness Within
Chapter Four After I Read Again, all I can do is echo myself. I want more of the atmosphere built. I want the boring, every day things ditched. I want ...
Jun 7, 2008
