JFW1415

[Note - this was written for CIA, and the contest was to write about what would happen if the Christmas kept coming back.] This month, our contest is all about ...

No matter what kind of story you have, you always have some form of character interaction. There are four basic kinds – character and character, character and self, character and ...

If you read ten of my critiques, I'll bet you anything that at least seven of them have comments of dialogue punctuation. It seems like an easy enough thing to ...

I don't care if your story is utter crap or if I think it should be on the bestseller's list. No matter how good or bad, I'm always going to ...

I seem to remember you once saying that one click a day was good? If we do that will it hurt more than help, or is that a good amount? ...

Honestly? I didn't like it much. You were trying way too hard to make us believe that this man was crazy. My suggestion would be to calm the writing down. ...

I really enjoyed this piece, but it didn't feel like one piece – it felt like two very different ones. I looooooved your opener, but then you just dropped it ...

Hello! *gets right to the point* I really enjoyed your story. It was well written, had well placed flashbacks, and made a rather boring event seem eventful and interesting. (Seriously, ...

haha, I always knew it was books, and I can see the cover and pages, but I can only see one disformed open book... *blames it on 20/800 vision* ~JFW1415

Isn't it unfair for the people that go to all the work of critiquing the whole novel on Microsoft Word but put it on a download document. They only get ...

All right, here's your critique. Now go switch your avatar, and don't go back. Seriously – you will make people pass out. understanding abuse This was my main problem with ...

Honestly? This was not very good. Yes, the idea behind it's fine. It could be a cute little story - if only you'd stop telling. The way you wrapped up ...

The promised critique! Sorry it's so late. I don't like doing nit-picks, and you wanted comments on the characters, so I suppose I'll talk about them for a bit? Raven ...

Well Heath, you certainly make life difficult for me. I loved this - how am I supposed to critique it? :) Anyways, I just noticed a few things. mother hen ...

*Prods* I don't know if I'll be ready this month - I'm just getting back into writing so I'm pretty rusty - so I was wondering if you think there'll ...