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Re: Ice Cubes #7
These sections are sooo short *Cries* I'm running out of ways to express my love for these, so I'm going to say now that I love all of this, and ...
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Re: Ice Cubes #6
hehe. cool money!!!! here we just have a stupid $ sign. *Shakes head sadly* What's sugar lace???
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Re: Ice Cubes #5
She placed a pin in my pal palm? with an m right??? “Fuck, but look t it, it looks well good another incomplete word. In this case I think t ...
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Re: Ice Cubes #4
Rob said he didn’t care how far she went, but I could tell that the woman that he once loved... the use of the word "that" confused me a bit, ...
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Re: Ice cubes #3
“Your very mature for your age, aren’t you? Your should be you're Other than that it was wonderful! I love what you're doing with this story and the way it's ...
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Re: Ice cubes #2
“And what to eat? How about the chicken? It’s real good here,” Few things about this, the first being "It's real good..." for some reason really would flow better, I ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Ice cubes
“My names Jamiy” there should be a ' in names. name's. =) But other than that, and a few grammatical errors here and there, I think it's a really good ...
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Re: POD 6- Scaring Love Away
POD= Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 6- Scaring Love Away After changing into a long sleeved shirt, Jamie quietly left the safety of her room. Hoping to God that her ...
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Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
After my seventh vasectomy things started to get bad...and I mean really bad, here I'll take you on a journey to show you just how bad things got.
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: POD 5- Comfort of the blade- on both accounts.
BTW- POD= philosophy of the Dark. :!: To the reader- This chapter contains violence and abuse. If you are sensitive to either topic, read with caution. :!: Chapter 5-Comfort of ...
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Re: POD 2- Poison Gas
BTW- Chapters three and four are posted, five may be coming later tonight or tommorow.
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: POD 4- The big "if" is actually "why"
Chapter 4-The big “if” is actually “why” We take advantage of the fact that those people-those who make life hell-leave us sometimes. Those are where the best years of our ...
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Re: POD 3- Coming Home
Chapter 3-Coming home It'd been two weeks since Jamie had written anything. Mostly because she had nothing to write about. Though she had a million things to write about. Her ...
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: POD 2- Poison Gas
JC's fine. As for Jamie's friends, well...your not supposed to like them, Jamie will say later that she only stays with them to keep herself from being alone. They've all ...
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Re: Did You Read the March 2007 Squills Yet?
I tried to download it, but my computer shut down every time...so...yeah
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